Very nice. I like stories that have people dealing with the consequences of events (like real people have to...), and this one is so true to the characters that I feel like I'm getting a backdoor look at the 'real' Atlantis. Good job.

I was wondering if someone was going to follow up on Carson's comment at the end, there. This is a little more....shattering...that I had in mind, but I like it all the same.

Now I think I'm permanently scarred for that episode - I'll never be able to watch it again without feeling creeped out.

However.....I can't wait for the next part. Hope it's soon.