Wow, this was really good. Lately I've found a lot of the Janto fic has gotten sappy, but you managed to keep the sappy to a minimum and still put the love and passion in there.

That said, you did miss one obvious thing. I don't think the girls were "frightened" into their tent. I think Owen screwed up a chance. And I suspect Gwen is a screamer. I just hope the boys can sleep through it.