waldos_writings: (Torchwood fic)
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Title: Love and Devotion
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: PG
Word Count: 400.  Yes, exactly
Summary:  She was sure she’d have felt less shocked, less embarrassed, if she’d walked in to find them shagging on that couch.  This was far more intimate.
Written for: [livejournal.com profile] kensieg for the ABC prompt challenge on my main journal.
Author's Note: Trying a new POV here. 




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Gwen shivered as she ducked through the cog door.  It was snowing again and there was a wicked wind coming off the bay.  Jack would kill her if he realized she’d forgotten her mobile before she was able to run in and grab it.   Rhys had been pissed off that she’d come in and turned around and run right back out, but Jack had made it very plain – the mobile was on and with her at all times.  Aliens didn’t hold their invasions for a time when it was convenient for the nine to fivers.

She ground to a halt at her desk, movement over in the corner catching her eye.

Jack was sitting on the sofa across from the autopsy bay.  Ianto was stretched out on his belly, his head on arm of the sofa, his body across Jack’s legs.  Ianto’s shirt and t-shirt were untucked and rucked up under his arms.  There was a mug with a tea bag tab hanging out of it on the floor near Ianto’s hand.  Jack was tracing soft circles on Ianto’s back with his fingertips. 

“Forget something?” Jack asked completely nonplused by the interruption.

Gwen’s eyes jerked back to her desk.  She was sure she’d have felt less shocked, less embarrassed, if she’d walked in to find them shagging on that couch.  This was far more intimate.

It wasn’t as if she didn’t know about them.  She’d seen them snogging often enough.  But, she realized, she’d thought that was all it had been.  Just snogging and shagging.  She was somewhat surprised to find that it was something more.  She and Tosh had both commented that day that Ianto had looked a little run down, a little tired.  She hadn’t expected Jack to notice.

But clearly, he had.  Gwen dug through the accumulated detritus on her desk looking for the wayward phone.  She hadn’t expected that level of devotion from Jack.  Jack, who tended to make everything about sex and relationships into a cheap joke.  She wondered when she’d started selling him so short. She found the phone and pocketed it.

“I’m good,” she said not looking over again.  She wasn’t sure if Ianto was even awake, but she suspected that even if Jack weren’t embarrassed by her barging in on them, Ianto would be.  And if he wasn’t, she was embarrassed enough for both of them.  She fled back to the car park.
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Date: 2007-12-29 12:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shara50.livejournal.com
Lovely and sweet!!

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Date: 2007-12-29 12:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thefannishwaldo.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

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Date: 2007-12-29 03:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darthhellokitty.livejournal.com
Awwwww... Just sweet.

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Date: 2007-12-29 03:43 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2007-12-29 05:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halfspokenwords.livejournal.com
Awww. This is really lovely, and really easy for me to picture. Gwen's POV worked really well, too! Thanks for sharing.

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Date: 2007-12-29 03:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thefannishwaldo.livejournal.com
Thanks so much. I don't like Gwen overmuch, so I figured writing from her POV might give me a little more insight into her. *shrug*

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Date: 2007-12-29 05:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] estarcollector.livejournal.com
This was sweet and lovely; just the thing to warm up a chilly evening.

(P.S. I forgot to alert you when I recced Post-Torchwood Stress Disorder. Bad me! Here 'tis: http://estarcollector.livejournal.com/77469.html )

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Date: 2007-12-29 03:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thefannishwaldo.livejournal.com
Oh, Eeeee! Thank you. :)

And I'm glad you liked this one too. :)

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Date: 2007-12-29 07:43 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] jo02
This was so sweet I just had to switch to the fluffy icon.

Please take this PoV out for a spin again soon!

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Date: 2007-12-29 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thefannishwaldo.livejournal.com
Aw! Fluffies! This is my fluffy icon. :)

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Date: 2007-12-29 11:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kribban.livejournal.com
This was insanely cute.

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Date: 2007-12-29 03:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thefannishwaldo.livejournal.com
Thank you. :)

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Date: 2007-12-29 01:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mara-202.livejournal.com
Awwww. That was really lovely. :)

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Date: 2007-12-29 03:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thefannishwaldo.livejournal.com
Thank you. :)

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Date: 2007-12-29 03:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daphne121.livejournal.com
Aww! This was adorable! I love cuddly Jack/Ianto!

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Date: 2007-12-29 03:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thefannishwaldo.livejournal.com
Thank you. They're just so cute, aren't they? :)

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Date: 2007-12-30 02:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aiffo.livejournal.com
Aww! Perfect 2am fluff =]

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Date: 2008-02-01 04:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thefannishwaldo.livejournal.com
Hee! Thanks! :)

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Date: 2007-12-30 11:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ravynbryce.livejournal.com
:) Lovely. Enjoyed reading this. Perfect to pick my mood up. Thanks for sharing! :)

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Date: 2008-02-01 04:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thefannishwaldo.livejournal.com
Thanks! Glad it helped cheer you up. :)

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Date: 2007-12-31 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] psyko-kittie.livejournal.com
Lovely. Perfect story.

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Date: 2008-02-01 04:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thefannishwaldo.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

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Date: 2008-01-03 10:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lovelyladylooks.livejournal.com
awwww.. very cute :)

I like the quiet moment Ianto and Jack share. It's a nice change from all the action they usually get... and I mean that in the sense of catching aliens not getting it on.lol. It's a lovely little domestic scene :)

Gwen intruding on it makes it all the more intimate since their little world is interrupted for a short moment. I like to think that Jack always knows when Ianto's not on top of his game and takes care of him when the others are gone... Ianto would never accept it with others around.

Lovely work, really :)

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Date: 2008-02-01 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thefannishwaldo.livejournal.com
Eeee! You got it exactly. Unless Ianto is barfing up a lung or had some kind of extremity hacked off, he's going to show up for work and do his job. And Jack's not going to call him on it unless he's actually damaging himself or screwing up the work.

Because Jack knows that if he wants to get Ianto to admit to needing to be cared for *later*, he has to let him save face in front of the others.

So glad you liked this. Thanks for the note!

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Date: 2008-02-07 08:55 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2008-02-07 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thefannishwaldo.livejournal.com
Thanks so much!

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Date: 2008-03-23 08:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neyne.livejournal.com
not so sure whether i've commented before but i just wanted to say how much i adore this fic. i find myself thinking about it when i'm down, and it always makes me feel better cause it's just so incredibly cute and beautiful. thanks for writing/sharing!

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Date: 2008-03-23 08:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thefannishwaldo.livejournal.com
Wow! That's just... wow! High praise, indeed. Thank you so much!

You're very welcome. So great to know it lifts you up when you need it. :)

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Date: 2008-07-19 05:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] demotu.livejournal.com
I read this a while ago and lost it - I'm so glad I stumbled on it again! The image of Jack and Ianto like that, and Gwen's embarrassment (at seeing that or at misjudging them? could be both1) are just perfect. Lovely, and I wish, I wish we could see something like this in the show.

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Date: 2008-12-07 07:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ivy-wang.livejournal.com
lovely moment...far more attractive than the shot in the show...
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