Fruedian slip much?

[waldos_writings]

Apparently I wrote this last night in my nano work...

We went back to his quarters wondering when Marines had become such pussies.


Um... not exactly what I meant. Unfortunately.

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[ladykoori.livejournal.com]

The Atlantis Marines turned into cats????

:)

[smallwaldo.livejournal.com]

Uh... no. John (or maybe it was me) developed quite the potty mouth last night. :)

[kyrdwyn.livejournal.com]

Heh.

I have food randomly breaking into song in my fic....

[smallwaldo.livejournal.com]

What???

[kyrdwyn.livejournal.com]

from my post yesterday:

the celebration began in earnest, with food and villagers breaking into song at random intervals.

Yeah. Food breaking into song? When did this turn into the Disney version of Stargate Atlantis?

[smallwaldo.livejournal.com]

Okay, you know I saw that, but I wasn't going to say anything about dangling modifiers until you were in beta-phase. :)

"Be our guest! Be our guest, put our exile to the test..."

[kyrdwyn.livejournal.com]

heee. Well, alas, I noticed it when glancing it over after I posted.

::refuses to let John start singing that song...they're in the middle of sex in the scene she's writing...that....would kill the mood::

[smallwaldo.livejournal.com]

Or at least get him a solid thumping on the head by two very put out partners. :)

YAY! More sex. :)